Feedback - Contemplative view of the moment of illness

"Some things are just lost for good..." We received this poem, entitled "Lost Things", from a friend, with the following message: "The poet who wrote this is young and very ill right now, in a hospital in Tennessee. I know of her through a favorite blogger. There is a call for group prayers to be sent to 'Jilly', thanks, Lindsey" ... We thought that the poem was so good, it deserved proper exposure. We hope Jilly approves. It fits perfectly with our other messages here for those going through hard times.